• 莫气馁,继续海投实习简历 - [生活点滴]

    2008-07-16

    投出的第三份实习简历收到了回复,无论最后能否成功,这对自己都是一个鼓励。继续海投,为自己加油~

     收到的回复:

    Sir,
    Thank you for your attention. This internship is purposed to be last for one year till the candidate be graduated so it is not fit for you.
    Thanks and regards,
    Chen

    我的再回复:

    Dear Sir,
            Thank you for you reply. I'm very sorry to tell you I made a serious mistake in my resume . I am due to graduate in July 2009,not July 2010. Besides,I'm somewhat confused by your words"be last for one year till the candidate be graduated" .Does it mean the internship last for a whole year and is not fit for students not in Shanghai? Or the internship is purposed for who will graduate next year? Could you tell me whether  I still have the chance. If it was In the latter condition?
           I really love the job,and the corrected resume is send to you as an attachment.
           Looking forward to your reply!
     Sincerely XX

    发完以后一检查发现竟有三处低级错误,暴汗无比!you应为your,last应为lasts,if应该是小写!也算一个教训, 写英文邮件或简历一定要仔细检查语法错误,否则因小失大追悔莫及!继续努力!

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  • 加油,不过最好可以找认识的人内荐。